Dukayn wrote:Nice start, I assume there's more coming?
My suggestion: Go backwards in time.Wadmaasi wrote:Dukayn wrote:Nice start, I assume there's more coming?
Knowing me...probably not. =/ I plan to write more (I mean, what's fanfic in a universe that contains giant explodey robots with no giant explodey robots in it?!) but I haven't written much of anything in years and I need to figure out how to bridge the distance between here and there in the absence of literary stargates residing inside my brain.
Joshua A.C. Newman wrote:Man. I really like how much of this story is implicit. Bravo!
Ced23Ric wrote:My suggestion: Go backwards in time.
In that case, teleport us. As long as you continue writing. I have a very boring day at the office.Wadmaasi wrote:Ced23Ric wrote:My suggestion: Go backwards in time.
I think I'm actually going to avoid doing that, for a variety of reasons. I'm already treading too close to minutae (formal tribunals, government/military structure, etc.) that we don't know about and Joshua may not ever write. I'm also eager to get to the explodey bits.
Ced23Ric wrote:In that case, teleport us. As long as you continue writing. I have a very boring day at the office.
Wadmaasi wrote:and compelled to serve in the Martian Foreign Legion for a term of no less than one hundred.”
Dukayn wrote:Mantisking wrote:One hundred what?
Based on the line that followed, I took that to mean he earns his freedom by killing 100 enemies.
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